| Comic Journal: Washington Square Park, NYC |
[Jul. 9th, 2008|03:24 am] |
Washington Square Park    (to be continued...) |
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Not to be a total asshole, (but I really do pay close attention to your posts which are always lovely), but it appears you are missing a closing parenthesis in the blurb about Stanford White.
I desperately need proofreading, so please keep it up. I'll fix that asap.
Evelyn Nesbitt: I was once the lady friend of Stanford White. He's the famous architect - Yes, that's right. He put me on a velvet swing, And made me wear... well... hardly anything!
Ruined at the age of fifteen, Your honor!
Then I went a married Mr. Harry Thaw... Eccentric millionaire.
Harry's a jealous man. Bang! Bang! That was the end of Stan.
Your honor, be fair! My Harry went crazy, I swear!
Now it's the Crime of the Century! Crime of the Century! Giving the world a thrill!
Harry's in trouble And Stanny's in heaven And Evelyn is in Vaudeville!
The Crime of the Century, Crime of the Century, Not such an awful thing-
Stanny's killed, But my mother's thrilled 'Cause now I'm the girl on the swing!
Thanks! Unfortunately, I didn't write it. It's from the musical version of the EL Doctorow novel Ragtime. Lyric by Lynn Arhens.
Yeah, I want to do a comic on that. Nesbitt was freaking HOT.
I once dated a girl who played Evelyn Nesbitt! Not quite the same thing, but she was very good-looking too.
Someone just mentioned this to me last Friday!
That Washington Square Park is a grave yard? | |